Check out this post on the Writing Nore blog on the topic of Active vs. Passive voice.
When writing fiction, creative non-fiction and even good non-fiction, writing in the active voice is usually best. Here’s a quick summary of why.
Using the active voice means the subject* of your sentence does the action. In other words it’s someone or something doing something rather than it being done to them. Active sentences are more alive because they’re more direct, succinct and closer. They draw you in.
[*The subject is the who/thing that’s doing something. It’s usually a noun like Jenny or The dog or noun phrase. It’s the beginning and main focus of the sentence. The object is the what is being done and follows the verb.]
Using the passive voice means the subject receives the action. The subject is being acted upon by an outside force. Passive sentences use more words, can be vague and often lead to a tangle of prepositional phrases…
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