Many authors who write book series, James Patterson, Janet Evanovich and Sue Grafton, to name a few, have written books that have common words in them. Patterson uses the word ‘Cross’, as in his character, Alex Cross, in such books as Cross My Heart, Cross Country, etc. Interestingly enough, however, he started out titling his Alex Cross books with nursery rhyme references like Along Came a Spider and Jack and Jill.
Janet Evanovich uses numbers for her Stephanie Plum novels. She started with One for the Money and is about to release Hardcore Twenty Four. Sue Grafton used the more limiting letter scheme for her titles. Starting with A is for Alibi, she is now about to release Y is for Yesterday. Having titles like these for a series is a great marketing idea and, in the case of Evanovich and Grafton, it gives you an idea of the order of the series. Patterson didn’t use the strategy of indicating the sequence, he just weaves the word ‘Cross’ into his titles to make them catchy. I liked Patterson’s approach and decided to try this with my first novel assuming that there would be a series. Right out of the gate, I was afraid I painted myself into a corner.
My first book, Frankly Speaking, was titled based on the main character, Detective Frank Rozzani. For the second title, I actually used social media and, giving my followers a synopsis of the book, I ran a contest for the title and the winner had their name used as a character in the book. The winner came up with the title, Let Me Be Frank. This title actually fit the story quite well.
Sometime after this book was released, I attended an author event and sat on a panel. I said something about the title issue and, after the panel, a man approached me with a list of about 30 Frank-related titles that he came up with. I still have that list somewhere, although, I haven’t used any of them yet.
The next title, Frank Incensed, is a pun-based title on frankincence, one of the gifts from the three wise men. The book has more to do with Frank being incensed at what is done to him in the book.
Frankly, My Dear, the fourth book in the series, is a story about a woman that prides herself on destroying men that don’t give her what they want. The title comes from the famous Gone with the Wind quote.
The most recent book, Frank Immersed, was originally going to be titled Frank in a Box, but my co-writer and I decided it wasn’t a great title, so we changed it.
I’ve got some other ‘Frank’ titles lined up, but I’m not married to this strategy as it can be a limiting strategy.
So, How do you select your titles?
Here are some tips when working on selecting them:
- Just write – your title will come to you eventually, don’t spend an inordinate amount of time agonizing over what to call your book or story. You can do that later, but, like me, the inspiration may come when you least expect it.
- Be creative – Your title can be intriguing, tell the reader a bit about the kind of story it is and can draw them in.
- Duplicate of other titles – Don’t worry so much about this. If your book is a different genre or fiction vs. non-fiction from a book with the same title, that’s okay.
A very informative post. Thanks for sharing.
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My title started of as the crystal cottage and ended up as The Curse of Time. With each book in the series a crystal will be in the title so book 1 is The Curse of Time #1 Bloodstone. Book 2 The Curse of Time #2 Golden Healer and no title for book three yet!
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Thanks for giving us some insight into your titles.
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Welcome, Don. 🙂
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Thanks for sharing this, Chris.
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Welcome, Don 😃
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Titles are always a tough one. Kind of nerve-wracking too since it’s one of the first things people see. Probably right behind the cover in terms of importance. For some reason, I need to come up with at least a temporary one first. Guess it’s to mentally organize and help explain it to friends. With ‘Legends of Windemere’, I just came up with flowing titles that connected to something within the story. I remember a lot of fantasy books being like that or have something blunt such as ‘The Dawn Treader’ or ‘The Compass Key’. My other series are all taking different themes so far. I have 2-word titles where the second one is always Bedlam for my dystopian action adventure and my upcoming vampire stuff is all 1-word titles that depict a main theme of the story such as ‘Loyalty’ and ‘Eradication’.
If there is a theme or method that helps books more than others then I haven’t found it. Might not ever do it because I get a bit too whimsical for my own good with titles.
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I don’t think there’s a foolproof formula. My fear is not so much attracting readers, but turning them off with a title. When I wrote Blood Orange, the opening scene is a basketball game. I thought about a basketball themed cover, but it’s actually such a small part of the book, which is a terrorism thriller, that I opted for a more ominous cover. It was well-received. The title, along with a basketball themed cover, would have, I believe, limited my audience.
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Good point. Smart move on the ominous cover too if the basketball part was only a minor section. I’m always tempted to take from the opening scene, but the better stuff seems to always be either in the middle or the overall theme.
Blood Orange is a great title.
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Fabulous post, thank you! I love the line ‘the inspiration may come when you least expect it’. That’s exactly what happened with my second book (which became a trilogy). I was writing late into the night and during a pivotal scene where the protagonist and her love interest are alone for the first time (sitting on a park bench), a thunderstorm, fork lightning and all, kicked off outside my window. Fearing lightning for as long as I can remember, I transferred that to my protagonist and allowed her love interest to rescue her and become a real hero. From that moment, an unnamed love story about a girl on an internship became ‘Lightning Attraction’. I really didn’t expect my deepest fear to cause that!!
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Many good things in life come when you’re not looking for them.
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Thanks for sharing this, Anna.
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Titles are so important. There’s one of my novels that is always picked up first at book fairs and fantasy conventions – and it is always because of the title. It needs to be snappy and memorable, wherever possible. I do like your use of ‘Frank’ in yours – it helps to make them memorable, another desireable trait!
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You’ve done something that every writer aspires to do, grabbing the readers’ attention.
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Great Blog! Thanks for sharing.
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They just come to me, sometimes before I start, sometimes after I finish. I’ve not written a series, but your point seems pretty reasonable to me.
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Thanks. You’re fortunate to arrive at them easily. Yours fit your stories well.
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I always look for ways to improve, but it’s good to hear.
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This informative post gave me an insight which had been eluding me.
I was stuck for a title which meant something in relation to the fantasy novel narrative. During one grumbling session about title and quality the word ‘patchwork’ popped into my head, in a dismissive way. But Happy Day! ‘Patchwork’ stuck since the main story related to folk at the ‘ragged’ end of society struggling with a burden dumped on them, ‘Patchwork’ became ‘The Patchwork Warriors’ which in turn enabled me to forge stronger depth to the three central characters and the narrative and eventually gave me a cool(ish) idea for my own cover.
So from this post I can conclude a Title can be a drive (during the umpteen re-writes).
Thanks!
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Thanks from r sharing your process.
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Great post! My titles tend to come organically as I’m writing the story. For my series, I tie them together with the sub-title, Wounded Hearts Book 1, Mended Souls Book 1, that sort of thing.
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That’s a great idea. I use a subtitle also. It helps the readers find the back catalog.
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I like to come up with a catchy title or hook and write a story based on it.
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I’ve done that. It’s fun and it challenges you.
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Sometimes I don’t get my title until I’ve written the last line of the story, and some permutation of that last line is the title. Makes me nervous, sometimes, when I don’t know what the title is, but it always seems to work out.
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Somehow, the title always come. I’ve known authors that have changed titles after publishing. To me, that’s like renaming a child. Not unheard of, but awkward.
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This is so true for me.
‘…the inspiration may come when you least expect it.’
It did! As you’ll see from my ‘About me’ page, Lightning Attraction came as the result of writing during a storm. I turned my greatest fear into a positive, reshaped the story and gave it the perfect name.
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That’s a great story. Thanks for sharing.
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I’m really struggling with a title right now, so I appreciate the information, Don. For some reason, titles either come super easy for me or with great difficulty!
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I’d rather struggle with the title than the story itself. That seems much harder to overcome.
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LOL! Good point, Don!
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Author Don Massenzio informs us about title and how important they are. Thank you for this great article, Don!
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Thanks so much for sharing this.
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It’s a great post, Don! You’re very welcome.
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You have great titles, Don. I look forward to reading more of them. My titles come to me before I begin to write. Then I write around the title. I only had to change a title once after I completed a book. If I don’t have a title I can’t begin to write. Funny, huh?! Best of luck with all your Frank titles! 🤗
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I’ve had it happen both ways. Sometimes the title changes or comes at the end. I hope you enjoy them.
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I enjoyed your first book and look forward to the rest! Hugs
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Thanks so much. I really appreciate it.
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So far the titles of my books have tended to come to me ‘out of the blue’. However, my publisher suggested a title (or rather, titles as it’s a series) for my latest releases.
I have, under a pseudonym, written in a different genre tht I’ve self-published, and the one I’m getting close to finishing I’m totally stuck with for a meaningful title.
I think titles are important. If the title isn’t inspiring, then, after being attracted by a wonderful cover, the potential reader will put the book back down before even looking at the blurn. I know, I’ve done this myself.
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Some titles, Catch-22, 1984, transcend the books that they label and become part of our language.
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Thanks for this informative post, Don. 🙂 — Suzanne
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You’re welcome. Glad you found it useful.
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How do YOU come up with your titles?
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I was originally going to title my novel Heart’s Delight because it takes place in the Santa Clara Valley which used to be known as The Valley of Heart’s Delight, back when it was teeming with farms and orchards. I changed it to Redwood Summer because it takes place in 1990, which is long after the decline of agriculture and the ascension of Silicon Valley. Redwood Summer was a series of proposed events that year designed to save old growth redwood forests. This isn’t a plot point in my novel, but it’s an analogous situation.
And Redwood Summer is a better sounding title. 🙂
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Sometimes it takes a while to land on the right one.
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I’ll say, took me 12 years and three titles in this case (the first working title was Running Uphill).
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