This post was inspired by the book, Nabokov’s Favorite Word Is Mauve, by Ben Blatt. This book applies numbers and statistics to some of the age-old adages about writing that we have all been told numerous times. Last week, I posted on the topic of adverb usage.
Exclamation points are the bane of some writers. In his book 10 Rules of Writing, Elmore Leonard states his rule of thumb on exclamation points. “You are allowed no more then two or three per 100,000 words of prose.”
So, just like with Stephen King and his adverb ratio, Blatt sets out to see if Leonard and other renowned writers subscribe to this rule. He starts by analyzing Leonard’s 45 novels which total 3.4 million words. His rule would have resulted in the use of 102 exclamation points in his writing over his career. His actual number was 1,651 which is 16 times what his rule states.
Still, when you look at his writing compared to other respected authors, he is at the top of non-usage of this pesky punctuation mark. Leonard came in at a rate of .05% per 100,000 words. The chart below, taken from Blatt’s book, illustrates where these authors fall in the exclamation point rankings.
Elmore Leonard ranks first in frugal usage of exclamation points per 100,000 words.
On a side note, the Washington Post did an article on the current U.S. President’s punctuation usage during his vigorous Twitter activity. It seems that his rate of exclamation point usage is 2.03%. This is nearly double the rate of James Joyce who averaged about 1.1% exclamation point usage over three novels.
I aggregated three of my own novels and used the ‘Find’ option in word to search for exclamation points. I found that, per 100,000 words, I average about 7.7 exclamation points. I’m well below Leonard’s actual results even though I’m over his recommended guideline.
How about you? Do you use too many exclamation points? Do you agree with this guideline?
Having read James Joyce, I can say that often the exclamation points are the only things that make sense on a page 😀
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That made me chuckle. 😆
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😀
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I agree!!!
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Thanks for sharing this.
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You are welcome!
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Do you use Exclamation marks?
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Thanks for sharing this.
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Guilty
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Reblogged this on Chris The Story Reading Ape's Blog and commented:
Find Out Why NOT!!! 😀
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Thanks, Chris.
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Welcome, Don 😀
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As has often been remarked, rules are made to be broken. I am always sceptical of advice to the effect that to be a good writer one should/should not write in a particular manner. Kevin
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My hackles rise the instant I hear ‘thou shalt not…’ but, I have to admit that I’m weaning myself off the exclamation mark. I really was using far too many. -sigh-
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Admitting you have a problem is the first step 🙂
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-giggles- So true! oops….
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True. It’s fun to look at how writers who give advice practice what they preach.
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I do not use them. Perhaps once in last novel at the suggestion of my editor who thought a line of dialogue deserved it. As an editor, I’m a stickler for using words to express exclamations.
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Reblogged this on The Manuscript Doctor and commented:
I agree with this blog post from Don Massenzio. Use your words to express exclamations!
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Thanks for sharing this.
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If the sentence/scene calls for it, I use an exclamation point. If it doesn’t, I don’t. Sometimes I think we get too hung up on all the rules. I do, however, find these charts fascinating. Thanks for sharing, Don!!! 😉
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You’re welcome.
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I agree with Sue Coletta’s comment – if it’s needed I use it, otherwise I don’t. Getting too anal about The Rules can strangle your story.
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True. It’s just interesting to see how those who are viewed as ‘the masters’ live up to the rules.
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Yes, it is!
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Thanks for sharing! Fortunately this is one of the few recommendations in writing, I don’t break 🙂
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Rules are made to be broken…in some cases.
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I don’t have ANY exclamation points in ANY of my books. Now, I’m sure you noticed that I didn’t say, “I don’t USE…” because that wouldn’t be the truth! Every ms I send to my editor comes back stripped! Drat…
Thanks for the wonderful article and First Place chuckle about James Joyce. LOL
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No problem!!!!! Glad you liked it!!!!
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I don’t have ANY exclamation points in ANY of my books. Now, I’m sure you noticed that I didn’t say, “I don’t USE…” because that wouldn’t be the truth! Every ms I send to my editor comes back stripped! Drat…
Do you?
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This is a great post Don!!! And I certainly agree with this Guideline!!! Exclamation points!!!! Tsk!!!! Would you credit it?????!!!!!
All joking aside, your post got me thinking. I wonder if there might be a correlation between the type of prose, the intended audience, the period it was written, and an author’s in house style with the number of exclamation points.
Take King and Joyce for instance. I think it fair to say that while Joyce is definitely a literary author, King is firmly popularist. For a popular mass market paperback author exclamation points are certainly a good way of banging your point home easily. (And that certainly sounds a lot snootier than intended.) Perhaps King also wanted to keep the successful in-house style he felt his readers expected.
Joyce probably used a lot because how he was writing; using colloquialisms and direct speech to produce a sense of intimacy and urgency, like he is shoving his readers’ faces deep into the scene and holding them underwater, as it were, until they gasp. Maybe because of how he was writing, he choose a style that in some ways mimicked popular mass market paperback authors of his day- like detective novels.
In truth I suppose we’ll never know.
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I agree. The thing that fascinated me about this, as well as my post from last week on adverbs, is the examination of how well the author who issued this rule abides by it.
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Great post Don! 🙂
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Thank you Ernesto. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
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I use quite a lot, but mainly in conversation – and emails. I suspect I would not enjoy Elmore Leonard’s books, partly because he has too little worth exclaiming about.
I don’t like faux statistics like this, but if someone wants to take an extreme view, and someone else wants to cite James Joyce as the opposite end of acceptable, then I’d take the median and aim for that. That would bring a target somewhere between Dan Brown and D H Lawrence, without doing the math.
Either that, or choose someone whose style you enjoy, and consider how that person uses exclamation marks!
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I agree with your thoughts on this. My fascination was with seeing how an author that utters a rule like this lives up to their own edict. I did the same with a quote on adverbs from Stephen King last week. This post has generated a good deal of great conversation.
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I rarely use exclamation points since I read using them is like shouting in regular speech. 🙂 — Suzanne
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They have their place and, depending on the context, are appropriate. If you read Elmore Leonard’s writing, his characters don’t lend themselves to excitability and exclamation points.
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Thanks for sharing these cool facts, Don.
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You’re welcome.
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Reblogged this on Nesie's Place and commented:
Do you overuse exclamation points? 😕
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Thanks for sharing this.
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I only use exclamation points in dialogue. I write my narrative in third person so they make no sense there. No sense at all!!!!
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Great points!!!!!
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I notice there are some great writers at the wrong end of the exclamation chart: Wharton, Dickens and Conrad. And some great modern writers as well: Orwell, Tolkien, Rowling. Whether you use certain punctuation marks depends on the story you’re telling, and how your characters deliver the story. In A Man Called Ove and Britt-Marie Was Here, Backman uses exclamation points and he breaks other rules, which give these books immediacy and vigor. I am trying to relax about the rules. An exclamation point, though, can also create false urgency!
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You are correct!!! Thanks for your thoughts on this.
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Thanks for stopping by my blog and following, Don. 🙂 — Suzanne
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You’re welcome.
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I use them when I want to make a point! Or to show excitement! Or surprise! Thanks for the helpful post!! 🤗
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Glad you enjoyed it.
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“Hey Ed, the book is ‘flat’ without exclamation marks. Give it ‘some life’!!!” Authors to me 😀
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