Check out Dan Alatorre’s latest post on his blog on the topic of Point of View.
Using my unreleased manuscript An Angel On Her Shoulder, I am showing you my techniques for reworking a story into a more readable, more enjoyable piece.It’s 45+ lessons in about 45 days. (To start at Chapter 1, click HERE.)
To view it best, bring up the two versions in different windows and view them side by side to see what was changed.
Then give me your thoughts in the comment section.
Point Of What?
One thing I struggled with early on – okay, I STILL struggle with it – is Point of View (POV)
Unless you are an omniscient being, you can’t know what’s going on in other people’s heads. Same with in writing.
Allow me to explain.
One of the BIG differences between the original and final drafts of the chapter where Mallory went to the store and got freaked out by the homeless guy…
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