Writing Great Dun Dun DUNNN Moments

Here’s another helpful post from Dan Alatorre on the topic of writing pivotal moments. Enjoy,.

Dan Alatorre

coverUsing my unreleased manuscript An Angel On Her Shoulder, I am showing you my techniques for reworking a story into a more readable, more enjoyable piece. It’s 45+ lessons in about 45 days. (To start at Chapter 1, click HERE.)

To view it best, bring up the two versions in different windows and view them side by side to see what was changed.

Then give me your thoughts in the comment section.

Dun Dun DUNNN: The Big Reveal

I don’t want to say much about his one before you read it, but as you do, consider if we need it at all.

Wait, you title a post Dun Dun DUNNN and then ask if we need it?


Chapter 27 “FINAL”

“Okay, okay, slow down.” Tyree had touched a nerve, and he knew it. “Calm down. Back up.”

The heat drained out of my cheeks


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