Check out Dan Alatorre’s latest post where he gives us some tips on how to ramp up the tension in our writing.
Using my unreleased manuscript An Angel On Her Shoulder, I am showing you my techniques for reworking a story into a more readable, more enjoyable piece. It’s 45+ lessons in about 45 days. (To start at Chapter 1, click HERE.)
To view it best, bring up the two versions in different windows and view them side by side to see what was changed.
Then give me your thoughts in the comment section.
I want you to read today’s chapter before we talk about it so I don’t give too much away. (The discussion and analysis will follow at the bottom.)
BTW, I use the phrase “FINAL Chapter” just to distinguish between the OriginalChapter and this one. It will still go to beta readers and an editor, so it’s technically not final.
Chapter 22 “FINAL” (you did not miss chapter 21, it was absorbed into another…
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