Flashbacks Revisited

Here is a great post from Dan Alatorre’s blog on the topic of flashbacks

Dan Alatorre


Using my unreleased manuscript An Angel On Her Shoulder, I am showing you my techniques for reworking a story into a more readable, more enjoyable piece. It’s 45+ lessons in about 45 days. (To start at Chapter 1, click HERE.)

To view it best, bring up the two versions in different windows and view them side by side to see what was changed.

Then give me your thoughts in the comment section.



Hey, wasn’t Flashback a movie in the 80s?

Okay, to understand this post/chapter as a flashback, you have to have read some of the previous ones, but not all of them. We won’t hold it against you if you didn’t follow all the way from chapter one. probably. But you’ll need to go back and read a few chapters to really get this.

I’ll see you at the bottom.

Chapter 14 “FINAL”


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  1. Pingback: Flashbacks Revisited — Don Massenzio’s Blog – ameoti.co.uk

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